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Shimmer.
I am, every
               breath counted.
      Tapping time on the
   calendar like a waltz in
Wednesdays.
           Winter light still glows
           in her eyes, but
           summer maker her
           truly shine.

She is spinning in the
incense smoke and I
am wondering, living in
a gap between you and me.

She said I'd know an
angel if I saw one.
    I would fall to my knees in
    awe, fire and light,
    some celestial warrior,
And I see it,
            there,
in the summer smoke,
      bright,
living only one day a week.
Summer seems so short
counted in days
I can see
your smile.

Seconds slide by me and vanish into
the incense smoke, falling into blue
fabric and twisting into the hammock twine.
I,
Without,
You,
Still waiting,
                  I am still alone,
          though loved, why
       am I counting
    time like a
waltz in Wednesdays?
yep~
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Your wonderful literary work has been chosen to be featured by DailyLitDeviations and has been selected as our “Pick of the Day”. It is featured in a news article here: [link] and on our main page.

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Oh my goodness! Thank you so much!
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You are quite welcome! :)
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A lovely piece. Beautiful imagery, wonderful flow. Great job.
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Thank you so much!
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You're welcome. :aww:
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Avallynh Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
beautiful, beautiful imagery -- delirious if it weren't so carefully gentle.

Summer seems so short
counted in days
I can see
your smile.

-- my absolute favourite bit. so very striking.
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Oh, thank you so much! That means a lot :)
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Your fantastic work has been featured in Friday Night Features
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Oh, thank you so much! I'm flattered!
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You're welcome.
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That was stunning, thank you for sharing that.
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Thank you :)
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You are welcome
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this is fantastic!
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brightandwild Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Beautiful :love: The imagery here is fantastic, and I don't know if I interpreted it the way it was neccessarily mean to be interpreted, but either way I feel like it can relate to it~ Fantastic job, keep it up! :)
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Thank you so much! :)
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