Deviant Login Shop  Join deviantART for FREE Take the Tour
×

:iconroxilove10: More from roxilove10


More from deviantART



Details

Submitted on
January 18, 2012
File Size
1.8 KB
Link
Thumb

Stats

Views
338
Favourites
21 (who?)
Comments
17
Downloads
8
×
Shimmer.
I am, every
               breath counted.
      Tapping time on the
   calendar like a waltz in
Wednesdays.
           Winter light still glows
           in her eyes, but
           summer maker her
           truly shine.

She is spinning in the
incense smoke and I
am wondering, living in
a gap between you and me.

She said I'd know an
angel if I saw one.
    I would fall to my knees in
    awe, fire and light,
    some celestial warrior,
And I see it,
            there,
in the summer smoke,
      bright,
living only one day a week.
Summer seems so short
counted in days
I can see
your smile.

Seconds slide by me and vanish into
the incense smoke, falling into blue
fabric and twisting into the hammock twine.
I,
Without,
You,
Still waiting,
                  I am still alone,
          though loved, why
       am I counting
    time like a
waltz in Wednesdays?
yep~
Add a Comment:
 
:icondailylitdeviations:
Your wonderful literary work has been chosen to be featured by DailyLitDeviations and has been selected as our “Pick of the Day”. It is featured in a news article here: [link] and on our main page.

Keep writing and keep creating.
Reply
:iconroxilove10:
roxilove10 Feb 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh my goodness! Thank you so much!
Reply
:icondailylitdeviations:
You are quite welcome! :)
Reply
:iconinthestarrynightsky:
A lovely piece. Beautiful imagery, wonderful flow. Great job.
Reply
:iconroxilove10:
roxilove10 Feb 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much!
Reply
:iconavallynh:
Avallynh Feb 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
beautiful, beautiful imagery -- delirious if it weren't so carefully gentle.

Summer seems so short
counted in days
I can see
your smile.

-- my absolute favourite bit. so very striking.
Reply
:iconroxilove10:
roxilove10 Feb 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, thank you so much! That means a lot :)
Reply
:icondreamsinstatic:
dreamsinstatic Feb 3, 2012  Professional Writer
Your fantastic work has been featured in Friday Night Features
Reply
:iconroxilove10:
roxilove10 Feb 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, thank you so much! I'm flattered!
Reply
Add a Comment: